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Tuesday, December 11, 2012
Religion in East Asia, South Asia
How can two different countires use religion with natioalism in two different ways in the 20 to 21st century?
Watch your spelling: change "conrtol" to "control. Also, maybe clarify the second portion of your sentence (about India and nationalism). Change "in the" to from to improve flow as well. Otherwise, good question!
I like your question I just agree with Emily about clarifying the question. Also, maybe put the countries you are going to talk about in your question.
Your peers have mades some very useful comments: focus your question to India and China and identify the religion (and/or philosophy?) under consideration. Make sure that your question is both open-ended and addresses a cause-and-effect relationship.
Watch your spelling: change "conrtol" to "control. Also, maybe clarify the second portion of your sentence (about India and nationalism). Change "in the" to from to improve flow as well. Otherwise, good question!
ReplyDeleteI like your question I just agree with Emily about clarifying the question. Also, maybe put the countries you are going to talk about in your question.
ReplyDeleteI think you need to specify which countries, and in what ways they differ. Also, you spelled nationalism wrong.
ReplyDeleteYour peers have mades some very useful comments: focus your question to India and China and identify the religion (and/or philosophy?) under consideration. Make sure that your question is both open-ended and addresses a cause-and-effect relationship.
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